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Monday, July 14, 2008

Sadness

She blew it.
No point hiding.
No point denying
these moments of pain.
Her mind had gone blank.
Why? Why then?
Why drain the sea of hope,
To a sad little glen?
Her plans tore to shreds.
Her dreams not in sight.
They had lied when saying
Her future was so bright.
Confusion now in mind,
On the edge she stalls.
What now? What to do?
She's not ready to fall.

1 comment:

Amelia said...

I love this one! It really captures the feeling of hopelessness and the way we all dread failure. Great job!!

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