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Sunday, July 19, 2009

Wandering Love

A promise fall in promised wake,
A lover's soul did leave and take.
Vain, a promise heart did make,
A lover scorned in lovers' wake.

Who was to know if they were true,
Vows so cast as lovers do?
Liars need those hearts so few
Which sow for truth as liars grew.

Perhaps, no truth, perhaps, no lie
Could pull the hook from anchored sky,
But eyes all virtue thrice defy
As glances send the heavens fly.

Post 100!!! I'm not sure if this is supposed to be an upcoming (now occuring, soon to be past) given for a devoted blogger, or simply a landmark that we all sleep by. Yet, still it must be a landmark. All numbers are one kind of landmark or another, whether a dagger in the eyes or a dagger to the eyes.

5 comments:

Rea Reyes said...

i have to say, your poetry has improved since the last time i read one (which i hate to admit, was a very long time ago).

hmm you know, i've been thinking about the perfect guy and how we might not be perfect for them. it's because we build up this perfect guy and we think that such a divine character would never stoop to our level.

GERARD BUTLER WAS PHANTOM?! OMG NOW I SEE IT! AHH I DID NOT KNOW THAT! haha sorry. umm i think he's recently starring in chick flicks haha. you know me and chick flicks. he did one a year ago i think called p.s. i love you. there's one coming out this week i think called the ugly truth.

Amelia said...

I really like this poem!!! Would you mind if I made a wallpaper of it?

Congrats on reaching your 100th post!!! :D

thoughtfullyspeechless said...

No, Amelia. I definitely wouldn't mind!!!! Again, I'm so glad you like it.

And thank you so much, for the congrats. I guess these little things keep me looking forward to the future. :]

Amelia said...

I made this one into a wallpaper! It's up on Painted Stain, so you can see it there. I hope you like it! :)

thoughtfullyspeechless said...

I do like it, Amelia. Thanks so much! It makes me think, and connects to the words so well!

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